I wanted to remember a line of poetry while walking. And then this flashed ..Home they brought the warrior dead.. and wondered if it would have been Home they brought the warrior dead . I was thinking about the merits of using 'her'.
The second version seems to be the what it actually was. But hey, each word in a poem makes a difference to the poem.
Now I cat remember the line of poetty that I wanted to remember, even though I remember the fancy mnemonic but I dont remember that line. How could that be?
I flashed back to the field in the park and the walk, the birds and now I remember:
How close is too close
for the birds?
When I think I am far
enough
they still fly way
cutting the corners
too close maybe
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