The Effort by Claire Holroyde

 

The Effort 

The scene of the main character on the ship, going wrong way. This could have been added to show that he is in an unfamiliar place and that he is lost in thought or not his self .

Length of a scene

5 major plot points

Reading how Maya is investigating Jack's scars.. we try to udnerstand the wornness of the blemish.. all writing or art is trying.. not from place of knowing how to write.. but trying to write and see how it works out..

Able to see how research would fit into the writing. When it is about some place where you havent been.

So many forms on ships

Refuse Record book

Now I see why the ship scenes started with a drill. Unique about it. 

When is a person declared missing on a research vessel? Expecting logging into a system at required systems is one way. But its possible that someone else signs. Requiring them to come and sign at a place recorded with a video or photo is another way.

Wow, missing and unidentified go hand in hand. 

If we were like this glass octopus, we could watch whats going on inside our body and fix ourselves if we wanted to.

The lost twin brother - are all secondary characters either similar or contrast to the surrounding and settings to add more depth to the situation to make it a whole, closed cosmos.