Snow lying in the ditches shows how much snow there is.
Why April?
Schoolmaster alternate title gives something away.
By becoming a part of a routine, we become timeless and the knowledge about the surroundings seeps into us.
"she knew every stone, every tree on the road from the town to her school" sounds cliche but also the clicheness that can only come from immersion, what you know something as the back of the hand
Is the unanswering brother to show that she wouldnt be the one to end relations?
Why the horseman?
To bring in the news from the tavern and the happenings. What if we just got to that? This will show the role of the schoolmistress.
smelt (nose) - smelted iron
pupils - both eyes and students
Like the no solution as one of the answers to a customer facing a problem, not reading the story is an option for the reader, they can go back to what they were doing, before and after doing. The story needs to keep the reader in the story. Till the end.
George Saunders calls a story a set of expectations and their resolutions.
After page one:
Summary
A lady very situated in the school life, as if she began as a school teacher even losing track of her childhood and family. No references to her life as a school child or comparisons with how school is different now.
What are you curious about?
Why does she not enjoy the ride?
Where do you think the story is headed?
Maybe she will not get her pay?
The company has to work with the expectation set or exploit them. When the infinite possibilities keep narrowing, the company has been derisked like The Power law.
Juggler with pins in the air. Blind Juggling.
Climax is the last five folds in the 45 folds to the moon.
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