Page 14 of Barely south April 2012,
and grip my open palm like landing along
with the image of doves just released that take to flight
express more than the sum of words.
The motion would be hard to explain, but once you think from the bird's action and put in all that you know about a perch, it becomes vivid.
While reading the beginning of Regeneration at Mukti, it pulls the reader in with all the details of the house. As a reader, you give all your senses to build that picture in your mind.
When I read a short story by Steve fisher in Triquarterly, when the narrator talks of windows opening around, my scene had tiny windows opening out of the narrators biceps.
and grip my open palm like landing along
with the image of doves just released that take to flight
express more than the sum of words.
The motion would be hard to explain, but once you think from the bird's action and put in all that you know about a perch, it becomes vivid.
While reading the beginning of Regeneration at Mukti, it pulls the reader in with all the details of the house. As a reader, you give all your senses to build that picture in your mind.
When I read a short story by Steve fisher in Triquarterly, when the narrator talks of windows opening around, my scene had tiny windows opening out of the narrators biceps.
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