The beginning lines
The plain was grassy, wild and bare reminded me of The woods are lovely, dark and deep poem. Somehow the lovely does not fit there, I'd like it better with lonely. Similar one There was atime when meadow, stream and grass.
The tabor in this poem, with tom tom reminds me of seven caveats in May by Maxine Kumin.
Another beginning line with a Heavy hand is Sometimes in the heat of the snow
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