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Tuesday, November 12, 2013

I have been to London to look at the queen

From a bleeding goat

The dying goats last words

To write what I want, I need to break the twig which seems to take the courage of the hiker in 28 where to live and to die both need courage. When the opposites dont maintain their tension, the minutes, hour and second have all fallen in line. Even the hour glass needs upturning. It aint counting when its done counting. The hour glass needs to be on an inclined trapeze.
For the first time, the hour glass looks like a wine glass too.
Timewheel and Giant Hourglass

Three things that stopped me in my tracks

1. A presentation at work showing the design in schematic.
2. How to sketch with electronics
3. Cowboy up sticker in the parking lot

This book belongs to

This life
belongs to
me be longs
to be me
Esse

The best author is the one who is ashamed to become .. - Nietzsche

Lemon juice

Lemon slows
decay of rice
Pulihora

A bowl of Pulihora is left in the open overnight. I took it for grante dthat it would be spoilt. While gettin ready to clean it, I smelled it for bad odour. And then it occured how on trips on trains and flights, we take Pulihora and air it a bit so it stays fresh longer.


Sunday, November 10, 2013

Putting the skin of aloneness on




A while ago at a lonely bus stop I saw a LED display with moving indicators of time and temperature. On the wintry night that moving display gave a cozy feeling. That place felt like you wouldnt feel alone even if you were.
This book with vibrant illustrations with background changing constantly spread by spread seems like that display. If you read the book fast enough you can match the rapping tune of the makers in the video How to be alone, of the same name as the book.

Smooth pebbles





Some writers like Gail Sher have made Haiku practising famous. 
Kigo - spring rain?

poet Title clarifies poem

She picks paper white
as boiled egg


From the haikus that I liked best, I take lessons in
1. How few words can encompass the world. Like the Worldsowrth's world-grain-sand
2. Actions in nature, traced back to its origins, find company - cedar cones (Gerald Vizenor)
3. Ilusions - James W hackett - minnows in shallow
4. Origin of certain thoughts like Peggy Willis turtle on a turtle on a rock

Dawn.. the rooster for sacrifice calls in the temple - K Ramesh

My favourite - Mule dragging dawn across the bridge - John Willis

At the beginner level you will be taken by aleast few haikus and enjoy the moments of when the poetry was written.
I can memorise this poetry if not Shakespeare.


Saturday, November 9, 2013

Good find


I have never heard of the poet BJ Ward. The cover of the book ’Jackleg Opera’ with its exposed piano is like Billy Collin’s poem ‘Building with its face blown off’. Rubberneckers welcome.
My favourite is ‘Upon learning that hearts can become stones’. It is easy to relate with poems that have a tangible inspiration. This poem triggered by a newspaper clipping is a good example of his enchanting poetry. For a beginner poet just coming to the acceptance or realization of this metaphor would be the start and the end, while the poet here draws out the evolution of hearts to stone through the channel of life and language.
In most poems, the lines are of equal length but the pacing of words split the lines in the readers mind while reading. Visually the poems have a formal long line look. But the verbs in the middle break the line causing the illusion of bite size literature. There is the occasional Emily Dickinson style dashes. Often I would auto read the poems and then go back to the beginning of the poem to make sure, I didn’t miss anything.
Most of BJWard’s poems address a definite subject ranging from banal like stapler to universal like love. It could be a turtle, answering machine, cats, lovers, absence, unavailable father. Father poems steer clear of bitter but not without leaving a chilling effect. Many of literary figures too show up for some humour.
Having been a poet for more than 2 decades, poetry workshops and book tours too find find place in the book. In one such, the poet compares writing poetry to skiing
‘spreading easily across white surfaces,
Making our way from one margin to the other
And leaving marks-‘


Tuesday, October 22, 2013

Darkness lingers in his poem like nature in Frost's



Most poems have three paras.

Point Reyes poems - prose poems

In 'A conversation'
'Hair is excitable as a child of four or five
It is a hammock on which the sleeper lies/





Saturday, October 12, 2013

The biscuit dome

If we didnt have gravity
the odor of things
would come in spheres

Anthology



Fossil of race.
A fossil is
a diary of times past
Bones are remains, the essence
that time leaves for later

Eggheads
The poem feel likes  the poet is talking about himself when he is so acquainted with the ways of eggheads at the end of first para.
I take your T-short to bed again starts in one place and ends in another
bowl of foreign coins - chokecherry heart
Mascon
Epithalamium

In every myth theres a secret. Something to think about when you read mythology.

Exercise: Wrte an outline of your memoir
outline for my memoir - poets note

Exercise:
The shape of pouring soy milk
Write of arrangement of nature - transitory, repeatable.