A dream visit to the pediatrecian

There are a few
experiments on the wall
written here and there

There are many people
around like its a
fast food joint
-hard to find all the
to -dos

You jot down the baby's
reactions from each of
the exercises

when its your turn
the doctor interprets
the results

Why is it so
complicated?

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Must have been the result of a disney theme memory book uptil five year age for the baby, which had a column for baby's reaction to each of the vaccinations.

Android voice

In jane shore's Dream City poem on pg 45,

A voice called out "This is your room.This is your bed"

Frances Mayes in 'the Discovery of Poetry' says that she tacked Loveliest of trees poem on a cherry tree. people stopped by and read it. Imagine such a tag on everything you see. Write your lines on it. When you revisit, feel free to revise and update it.

Exercise: Write from a thing's point of view not in their inanimate sense but in a way that reflects them through their voice.

Metaphor at poem level

Jane shore's Shit soup poem.

She begins with a recipe but extends the poem to other events in life.
The pot gets extended to the grave ditch. The food to one's lived life.

In pg 84 with the example of 'The Envoy' poem, Ted kooser calls such a thing as 'lifting the eyes' in words of Chinese poets.

Detoured from the poem

Jane Shore in 'Fairbanks Museum and Planetarium' poem describing the ongoings at the place, writes of
'.. a grumpy
French-Candian family with three wired kids
detoured from the Cabot Creamery,
...'

I would have thought that kids love to go zoos and planetariums but the expression that they have been detoured from a place they like lets another poem going on not only of what one likes or does but of another of what one doesnt like or doesnt.

Exercise: Write a poem where you did something but in terms of what you didnt.

New shoes

In Jane shore's 'My mother's space shoes' poem there is a Xray fitter.

When we were kids
and my dad
on his way to office
put a paper on
the floor
'Put your foot on it'
He then outlined the
foot with a pen

It all meant
only one thing

Imagine

Yesterday while watching TV, I came across a snapshot of Statue of Liberty, and thought how would Buddha's hand look on her head.

I liked these lines of Ted Kooser. In that same page he writes 'If the light that falls upon what lies beyond is very bright, you see the scene in vivd colors and there is only the faintest hint of your reflection in the glass. if the light beyond the window is faint, as at dusk, the speaker's reflection in the glass is much more prominent. The speaker notices both his or her reflection and the scene beyond.'

Recently:
The dark shadow of my head on kitchen window is hollow in the middle with the leaves and stems of the bush outside. Feel like invisible man.