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Tuesday, October 22, 2013

Darkness lingers in his poem like nature in Frost's



Most poems have three paras.

Point Reyes poems - prose poems

In 'A conversation'
'Hair is excitable as a child of four or five
It is a hammock on which the sleeper lies/





Saturday, October 12, 2013

The biscuit dome

If we didnt have gravity
the odor of things
would come in spheres

Anthology



Fossil of race.
A fossil is
a diary of times past
Bones are remains, the essence
that time leaves for later

Eggheads
The poem feel likes  the poet is talking about himself when he is so acquainted with the ways of eggheads at the end of first para.
I take your T-short to bed again starts in one place and ends in another
bowl of foreign coins - chokecherry heart
Mascon
Epithalamium

In every myth theres a secret. Something to think about when you read mythology.

Exercise: Wrte an outline of your memoir
outline for my memoir - poets note

Exercise:
The shape of pouring soy milk
Write of arrangement of nature - transitory, repeatable.